Minggu, 31 Juli 2011

poetry-anyone before and after corrected

Anyone
Anyone comes when I need her
The place for shared out
Anyone won’t leaves me alone
Both happiness and sorrow
Anyone is my bestfriend
Her decorate my life
With hapiness …
And sorrow
I’m be grateful to My God
Has created her
Like my bestfriend
The place for shared …



Anyone
Anyone comes when I need her
The place for sharing out
Anyone won’t to leave me alone
Both hapiness and sorrow
Anyone is my bestfriend
She decorate my life
With hapiness …
And sorrow
I’m be grateful to My God
Has created her
Like my bestfriend
The place for sharing out

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